对于各位留学党来说，留学个人陈述的准备是必不可少的，那么留学个人陈述究竟怎么写比较吸引招生官的注意呢?接下来，请随我一起来学习一篇数学科学专业的个人陈述范文吧。
Mathematical Sciences Personal Statement
数学科学个人PS
Mathematics, overlooked as it is, is the most fundamental subject in our educational system and is THE enabling tool to solving problems. My commitment to maths stems from my recognition that as an effective problem solver, one ought to understand what is expected to resolve day-to-day difficulties. Mathematical proofs combine both logic and creativity and it is the beauty of maths as well as practicality which makes me want to study it further.
We are encompassed by mathematics; it surrounds us. My pursuit in maths broadened when I stumbled across a YouTube video from ‘Numberphile’, I began to see the subject in a different light; it was more than just an academic subject studied for a specified number of hours per week.
Instead I grasped that it was a way of explaining the inexplicable. Throughout my maths AS Level, I realised that I was acquiring an alarming passion for proofs. Combining this growing interest with reading books in the subject I appreciated that I had previously not understood how important meticulous working was until I learnt that it is essential to trace errors and eradicate assumptions and that simply having the right answer is insufficient. From Chemistry I have similarly learnt how to use meticulous working and designing experiments to solve problems, analyse and understand data. Through these pragmatic skills I have been able to bridge the gap between A-level and university maths and almost feel euphoria from the sense that there may be a higher knowledge still to be unearthed which, of we are as yet unaware.
Changing school and adjusting to the new style of learning was an issue that contributed to my underachievement at AS level, but I have gained further understanding of my subjects and am currently demonstrating how much of an improvement I will make in my upcoming exams and retakes through better exam technique.
Being selected as a maths prefect has given me the opportunity to help younger students and promote my passion for the subject to many younger students through open evenings, displays and assisting in lessons. As much as I believe in motivation coming from within, this can also lead us to think that we do maths entirely for its own sake. However that is apocryphal: the communal aspect of maths which enables us to be stimulated by the people around us and help other people solve their mathematical problems is crucially important.
Music is a mind-body exercise; you learn to become one with your body and mind while discovering how to be in harmony with the people around you. I am heavily involved in my church, my previous and current school’s choirs, where I have been lucky enough to perform at various prestigious events. While having fun, to my amazement I was actually developing my numbers, logic, discipline, agility, and maths through reading music. I have participated in drama performances for ‘The School’s Shakespeare Festival’ where I have travelled to many theatres to perform plays such as ‘The Twelfth Night’, and ‘Much Ado about Nothing’ and have become familiar with good memory skills through learning Shakespearian lines. My communication skills have also improved significantly through this involvement with drama.
Teamwork has been a fundamental attribute that I have learnt during my school career. I participated in a school enterprise week where groups competed to create their own products, and as team leader and financial manager, I helped my team beat our competitors by fostering a group atmosphere and will to win, which we did. I was given the opportunity show my inner creative business side, work with others and apply maths skills to real life.
Unlike other subjects which thrive on unsettled debates, give no final answers and allow you to work in isolation, Maths places high priority on comprehension, listening to others’ ideas and perceptions, which allows the subject to operate more efficiently in the intellectual world hence why I am set to study a degree in Maths.
点评：
1. 整篇文书虽然没有高级英文单词和复杂的数学术语，但时态准确，语法熟练，被动句、从句运用灵活，重复单词较少，阅读流畅。
2. 首段交代对数学产生兴趣的缘由——在You Tube上看了个有关数学的视频，从此打开了新世界大门。
3. 中间还有一段说明自己A-level成绩不够的原因——经常换学校。小伙伴如果标化成绩不够，也可以尝试在PS中做说明。
4. 申请者谈了在夜校给青年们上数学课的独特经历，申请者甚至认识到数学可以感染他人，这觉悟绝对受招生官待见呐。
5. 数学很多时候是枯燥的，需要艺术调和，申请者爱好音乐和戏剧，参加教堂的合唱、在学校的莎士比亚戏剧节上扮演角色，这些统统都是加分项。
众所周知，申请英国留学必须提交一系列的申请材料，其中个人陈述是非常重要的文件之一，因为一篇好的ps可以吸引招生官的目光，让招生官眼前一亮，那么，去英国留学ps(个人陈述)该怎么写?其实，只要避开这十大误区，就能写出一份完美的ps，接下来，就随藤博士留学来看看吧，希望对大家有所帮助：
1.不要援引别人的话招生官们想听到的是你的声音，而不是莎士比亚，爱因斯坦，保罗布里顿，马丁路德金，大卫艾登堡，笛卡尔或者拿破仑。所以，除非援引别人的话确实能形成你的核心观点，不然只是在浪费字数。
很多人都引用了同样的话，而最糟糕的情况就是这些话都违和地放在了PS开头。于是招生官忍无可忍地咆哮了：
“我不在乎洛克咱么想，我想知道你怎么想!”
“我已经厌倦看到关于拳王阿里的引用了。”
2.流水账不要无意义地罗列你看过的书，去过的国家，工作过的地方，担任过的职位。首先，这样的流水账很无趣，它无法体现出你所做过的事。真正有价值的是你从这些书、国家、工作中所领悟和学习的东西。
一个牙医专业的招生官总结道：“比起看一份罗列你观察过的手术的单子，我绝对更愿意看你从观察补牙填料中所学到的事。”
3.被用烂的陈词滥调不要用“ 'from a young age', 'since I
was a child', 'I've always been fascinated by', 'I have a thirst forknowledge', 'the world we live in today‘等等短语…你懂的。这些短语频繁出现在成百上千份PS里且表现不出什么内容。
4.用笼统陈述和未经证实的说法来吹捧自己
”I genuinely believe I'm a
highly motivated person’“或者 ”My achievements are vast“。取而代之的应该是举出有具体证据的详例。证明你的能力和才华，并不是表面文章。
5.慎用”passion“这个词”Passion“或”passionate“已经被极度滥用了。同上，证明你的热情，而非只是空谈。
6.生硬的用词频繁使用类似”fuelled my desire“， ”I was enthralledby“ 或者”that world-renowned author Jane Austen“会让人感觉你有点假(或者你貌似过度使用词典)如果某些表述你在日常交流中不用，那就别用在PS 里。假如你错用这些表述情况会更糟，比如”I was encapsulatedby the bibliography of Tony Blair“或”‘it was in Year 10 that mylove for chemistry came forth“。
7.抄袭，谎言或夸夸其谈UCAS(英国本科大学和学院招生服务中心)使用高精准查重软件，如果你从他处抄袭的话，UCAS会将这一情况告知你所申请的大学。在重视学术规范的国外这一情况的后果几多严重请自行脑补。
至于夸夸其谈嘛，如果你只是读了一章节，别说你读了一本书——你永远不会知道在未来何时的入学面试中这一谎言会被戳穿。如果你没做过、读过、或看过，别说你有。
8.企图搞笑在适当的情境下，幽默、随性、古灵精怪的风格会很有效果，但这样做很冒险，所以务必小心。
对于这一问题招生官们如是说：
”企图搞笑的效果可能极好，或者极坏。“
”招生官不一定能有和你一样的幽默感。“
”古怪不是卖点。“
9.消极的评论或借口在PS 里营销自己可能很困难，但不要因此就在PS 里大谈为什么你没有做成某件事，或为什么你放弃了大学入学考试。请务必专注于表现自己的积极方面。
10.无关的个人经历在PS里写自己是羽毛球健将或者参加了某次活动之前，先想想写了这些又能怎样。写这些经历能否为你的PS添彩?能否成为招生官给你Offer的强有力理由?如果不能，那就自行略过吧。
综上所述，以上讲的就是关于去英国留学ps(个人陈述)该怎么写的相关问题介绍。近年来，赴英留学一直是广大学生最热门的话题，同时，很多学生对于签证的办理、院校的选择、就业的前景、学习的费用等诸多问题困扰不断，别担心，藤博士留学专家可以为你排忧解难，藤博士留学在英国大学申请上一直保持着极高的成功率和优秀的成功案例，包含剑桥、帝国理工、伦敦大学学院、伦敦政治经济学院等G5院校成功申请Offer。也欢迎和藤博士留学顾问聊聊你的申请问题，听专家帮你规划申请。
申请英国的留学，最基础的A-level、IB等成绩一定要有，而PS就是大家的申请之中很主要的。毕竟来申请的优秀学生太多了，PS能够让学生更加突出。就到看看这份PS怎样写吧。
1、把自己与专业有关的经历和兴趣表现出来
PS中要写什么内容其实是很有讲究，有的可以写，但有的就不必要写。比如学术成绩上，像是IB/A-level成绩等等这些其实不需要描述，毕竟UCAS上都有这些信息了，没必要重复说明。PS的用处是描述自己做过或者是经历过的。而在工作或者是活动的经验上该多写写，要是自己所拥有的这些经历是跟自己申请的专业关联比较多的，也能表现自己能力的，自然是要多些。经验少的学生，若是有参加过社团、辩论社这些活动的，也可以写写在这些活动中自己得到了什么能够在这个专业上有用的能力。
2、写出自己取得的成绩
在成绩方面这个时候就别太谦虚了，自己有怎样的成绩如实的写下来即可，只是用词要准确。其实这只是把自己的亮点展示出来，学校看到学生有亮点，这样才会有录取的想法。
3、选该专业的理由
直接说明自己为何想学这个专业，或者是描述学这个专业对自己有什么用处。接下来就得描述对于这个专业有多少的热情，以及是什么理由能让自己愿意花几年的时间去学这个专业。
4、围绕专业选择的理由来描述
完成了介绍的部分，接下来套做的就是丰富PS中的主体。在一开始的一两段大概的介绍后，可以开始写自己的工作上或者活动中的经验，只要是跟专业有关的经历和经验都可以写，然后就延伸到自己的职业抱负，或者是写希望能在这门课之中得到什么。
5、语句尽量简洁
后期对PS进行我不是为了要凑够字数，而且要看自己的PS是不是围绕着申请这个主题来进行的。用词可以不太华丽，只要能把事实简洁陈述出来就行。其中大部分的内容是进行专业的讨论专业，再用一部分来讨论经验，最后还得用一小段去讨论自己对于这个专业的理想。
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