谢蕾留学(谢蕾留学)

my motherland, I had great difficulty with many things including everyday life, culture, study and so on. However, I am not a person to give up easily. Every time I met with difficulties, I would ask my host family, my tutor or others for help. At last I made it. Now I am adapted to the whole new life here

Besides, to have a balance between study and social life, I joined a club, where I made a lot of new friends and participated in many activities. I wondered at the excellent farewell of the US society when assisting in caring for the old and the disabled as well as helping children (out) with their lessons in a farewell house. In the Robot Museum, there was a wide variety of robots on show, either from the past, at present, or in the future. Every cell in my body woke up in the Ocean Park, where I saw fishes of different vivid colors and shapes, making my heart beat wildly. That was really a day of pure magic! The visit to the Rocky Mountains on the west coast of the country gave me a fantastic view of the amazing mountain scenery. / Once we went hiking on the Rocky Mountains on the west coast of the country, greatly amazed by the fantastic mountain scenery.

All in all, the p ast year is the most unforgettable time in my life. Studying abroad is a great experience, which will give you an opportunity not only to be independent but also to experience the wonderful world.

I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.

As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’ s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially welcomed.

This is some of my advice. I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed!

Yours,

Mike

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文。假如你是美国的Mike，你的朋友李华打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1.语言是道硬门槛; 2.适应能力很重要; 3.兴趣爱好被看重; 4.要有社会责任感.需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

亮点说明I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.包含一个宾语从句；Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.包含了一个表语从句和一个宾语从句；As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course.包含一个非限制性定语从句；Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.包含一个定语从句。